I had a photo of myself in Paris, the Eiffel Tower in background. There was no story as such, I was just enjoying the early morning quietness of Paris, laughing at something when someone snapped this photo.
I quite like the photo though the Tower is trying to steal the limelight. So I came up with this. (Apologies if you've already read it on my other haunting ground, Sarah's Cards.)
steel tower
a golden dome
grand avenues
& long boulevards
an obsession with symmetry
EVERYTHING MEETS & INTERCEPT
glass PYRAMID
more conventional
BRICKS & STONES
too,
NO LESS GRAND !
So that was my attempt at poetry and my attempt at art follows.
I never learned to write poems at school so please excuse me if I have made some fundamental error in words not rhyming or not having the correct number of syllables etc. But I think grammatically incorrect is allowed because it is art after all!
4 comments:
I like it: It has a very "left bank" feel to it :) That's a great photo too. Cool.
I love your use of all the different alpha's & yes! it is a lovely photo!! :D
I love this, Ifa, and your lines of poetry really look good with all those different lettering types. It has a wonderful casual student-in-Paris feel!
Hi Ifa,
I love this layout, fabulous use of all the lettering, brilliant.
Chrissy xXx
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